Saturday, August 31, 2013

What I Think Of Ikal First Love

Assalamualaikum,this is a second entry about rainbow soldiers again.:)

    What I think of Ikal’s first love is he is so excited. He likes A Ling very much for the first time at the shop to buy chalks. Even though Ikal only saw A Ling’s nails which is shining and beautiful, his heart beat fast and immediately falls in love. Whether he never saw the owner of the beautiful nails, he feels like the girl is a very good-looking person. At his age, their love can be described as ‘monkey love’. Ikal willing to go to the shop whether the distance from school to the shop is very far. From here, I can see how Ikal determined to know A Ling very much. After A Ling move to Jakarta, Ikal feel so frustrated and every moment, he only thought of A Ling. So, do not love someone very much who is not ours yet. Be careful. 

-yana akhir-

enjoy your sunday!!! :)

Rainbow Soldiers-The Character I Like Most and Why???


    The character I like most is Lintang. why??? I like Lintang because he has a determination. Lintang who is come from poor family has to go to school by bicycle because the distance from his house to school is far and every morning he has to wait the big crocodile cross the road.  After that, he is a kind person. This is because Lintang who is brilliant in mathematics, always help his friends to solve the questions. Then, because of him, their school wins the competition. Lastly, Lintang is a responsible son. This is because, after his father death because lost at sea, he does all the duty as a father and mother. He quit from school and takes good care of his younger sisters. :)
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-yana akhir-


Rainbow Soldiers - What I think of Ikal First Love


Again, this entry is about Rainbow Soldiers.  So Ikal first love would be A ling who he met at the store where his school always buy the chalk from.  What I think of A ling is that she is very cute, no doubt and she has a very beautiful nails (:  It was not wrong for a boy like Ikal to fall in love with someone like A ling because they were both so cute and I think they matched each other well.  Even though both of them were very young, but I can see how hardworking Ikal is to get to know A ling better.  He was willing to go back and forth from his school to the store just to meet A ling and that proved how courage Ikal was (:

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Sakinah Nasir

Rainbow Soldiers - the character I like the most and why

Assalamualaikum everyone! 

First and foremost, this entry is about Rainbow Soldiers movie that we all watched last Tuesday.  It was a good movie though.  So the character that I like the most would be Mahar! Why I like him? hmm good question! This is because he has such a cute character: the one who is good in singing.  I really love his singing especially the song "Seroja" that he sang for Ikal.  I was amused by his singing and I think he has a very good voice.  He also did a good job in creating such a unique performance to represent their school and unexpectedly, they won the competition.  Thanks to Mahar, their school got their first trophy that they can proud of.  To conclude, I like Mahar (:

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Sakinah Nasir

Friday, August 30, 2013

ikal first love

first love? haha hmm its up to him la if he wants to love a.ling  marry her, have kids with her. that is his problem. but realistically it is nonesense. you can call it cute. i call it dreaming. he is just what, 5? 6? haha no hate towards him but funny what. okay la ikal shows he has a strong heart going to meet her, brave one actually. he is even willing to go back and forth to buy chalks just to meet her. funny how love can throw you around like a ball, two actually. i take my hat off to him he never gave up though. hehe. sorry teech i dont know about love. you asked my opinion, here is mine. just 124 words. sorry.                      


character i like the most

those rainbow soldiers kids are all inspiring and heart touching, so its hard to choose the MOST i like, cause basically i like em all. but you know teech, he wants one, he'll get one. so the character i like the most is lintang.

1.unbelievable god gifted talent
he has a thing with numbers that others take years of practicing and memorizing. he works hard everyday. most of the people nowadays is not even close to what lintang go through every single day. he literally goes to school through an alligator. but he doesn't cry and complain like a BABY.

2.unbreakable bond with ikal
his relationship or friendship with ikal is beautiful. he goes through high and low, thick and thin with ikal. he has an unbreakable bond with him. he accompanied him when miss muslimah or mus asked ikal to buy chalks. after many years when all of them are grown up, ikal met lintang again. they didn't forget each other. this just shows friendship is beautiful.

3. a father-figure although he is just small
after winning the competition, he was so eager to show his achievement. unfortunately, his dad past away. he waited for hours till dawn. but he never gave up. but he didn't showed any sign of giving up. although he missed school, but he had a reason of doing so, he needed to take care of his siblings. he gave up his future for his family. he took care of em like he was their father.

there is alot more than just laughter in this story. teech wanted 200 words at first. so im not gonna be bitchy and give you 120 words, im gonna give you 286 words ENJOY BABY ;) hehe

Entry 2: Rainbow Soldier – What I think of Ikal’s first love?

What I think of Ikal’s first love is for me, love is subjective. It is so hard to reveal with words, but it is easy to reveal with physically. When the first time Ikal looks at A Ling’s fingernails, and he fall in love then he always find reasons to go to Toko Sinar Harian to meet A Ling. This is meant that we as human, we willing to do anything to get what we want. Love also gives full of spirit to Ikal such as Ikal study hard so that he can go to French but it also gives pain too when A Ling has move to Jakarta. Thus, love has advantages and disadvantages, so we must be careful when we fall in love.


Entry 1: Rainbow Soldier - The character I like most and why?

The character that I like most in Rainbow Soldier is Miss Muslimah as teacher in that movie. It is because I want to be like her who always gives advices and spirits to students. Miss Muslimah is a patient person in facing many problems for example, she just smile if teacher from PN Elementary (forgot his name) looking down towards her that she still teaching at SD Muhammadiyah even she got offer from PN Elementary. Furthermore, she also did her best to protect SD Muhamamdiyah from closed. If I put me in her shoes, I also do the same way like her because I really want to be a teacher that always energetic, creative and innovative and always help my students to be successful person in the future.


Monday, August 26, 2013

Grammar jail

grammar jail???

unique way of torturing students, diploma students. brilliant. hehe just kidding teech ;)


Body paragraph 2 & 3

salam, feels good to finish the body paragraph. although we had a few mistakes wrong, basically everything wrong. my partner and i learnt our lesson, hopefully. besides, mistakes build character i think so. anyways apologies for the late post hehe.


Friday, August 23, 2013

are we prisoners???

Assalamualaikum..grammar time!!it was a hard day!!we were sent to grammar jail because there are many grammatical errors and not relevant that time we must corrected our conclusion and find another ideas to make our essay interesting..thankfully, after two time we were sent to jail, Teech accept our conclusion at the end of class..seriously, i feel so happy and free for grammar and redo the essay..during jail time,some of us feel sad,stress and enjoy with this punishment..hihihi..maybe we can asked someone's ideas and help each others to correct the mistakes..finally,we can combine our introduction,body 1,2,3 and conclusion..thanks to all my friends and especially Teech!!! :)

-yana akhir-

SEXY BODY 2 & 3..

salam Teech & friends..sorry for the late post of body 2 & 3..sincerely, my partner(gee) and i do not have a time to prepare an interesting body..this is because last week we are busy and decide to finish it on wednesday's night..thankfully, i only have a class on 11am but my partner have a class on 8am until,we decide to finish body 2 & 3 quickly..with the tired body,makes us hard to create the essay..when its already 3 am, finally i can go back to my room..the next day,in BEL 311 class, our body 3 was rejected because it is not suitable..arrggghhh!!!!we have to redo and that make me angry..sorry Teech!!
here,this is our body sad :(

-yana akhir-


Assalamualaikum..I think it is not late for me to wish happy aidil fitri..for me,syawal this year was not meaningful..huhuhu..this is because UITM gave us a short holiday to celebrate hari raya and after that we have a common tests for account and costing..but thanks Teech!!!you don't give us assignment to do.. :) 
however,i really enjoyed spend time with my family..we gather to sahur and break fast together..i can help my mom and sister in the kitchen eventhough i am not an expert in cooking..this year,we are not making cookies,we just order from my mom's,i hope in future i will get a great experience..wassalam ^_^

-yana akhir-

Scary Grammar Jail

Hello AAC1103B-ers and Teech!

How are you feel about grammar jail? It is good? For me, it is good because I just into the jail for a while. Haha! My partner and I was the last person into the jail. Thanks my cutost prengggg! And why my title 'Scary Grammar Jail'?! It is because Teech arranged the table in small area then he switch off the fan and finally we were like sardine, cannot breath like usual. I will never forget about it. Anyone who has grammar mistakes would come to the jail. So, all my friends in AAC1103b came into the jail just because of grammar mistakes.

Thursday, August 22, 2013

prison corner


Last Tuesday, teech had created a prison corner for those who got wrong in grammar for their essays.  Of course, I was one of them.  However, I can say that it is not a bad memory to remember. I was actually having fun in the prison.  It was like we were all crammed in one place and cannot get out but we all managed to fill that boring moment by taking pictures.  I'm sorry because I don't have any pictures to show since I didn't use my phone camera.  But all I can say is that it is not that bad because I enjoyed it.  That's all, thank you (:

Sakinah Nasir (:

Body 2 and Body 3

Assalamualaikum chuollssssss (:

I'm quite satisfied about teech's comment for our body paragraph 2 and 3. he gave a good comment and we hope that we wouldn't do such mistakes ever again. thanks teech (:

Sakinah Nasir (:

Sunday, August 18, 2013

NINO! NINO! NINO! Comment time!

Hello AAC1103B-ers and Teech !

My entry for this time is my comment about body 2 and 3. What I've got from it, I think I should improve my grammar because in body 2 and 3 there is a lot mistake of grammar. But what can i do?? I was weak in grammar since kindergarten . Hehehehe! Haaa one moooooree, dear Teech, my partner and I was like to do  things over and over again (sarcastic mood). hahahaha! 

Wednesday, August 14, 2013

Body Paragraph1 Edit02

Submitted to : Mr Airil Haimi B. Mohd Adnan
Submitted by : Akid & Anis
Submitted on : August 1st 2013

Career women and housewives might be difference in term of personality and identity.  This is the most specialty that make them difference.  “A housewife might be very meek, gentle and mild while a career woman has a stronger personality” (Cissysong, 2010, online).  Housewife is a mother and wife at home that taking care of her husband and children all the time and will give full attention to her family.  Despite housewife, career woman only gives half of her attention rather than housewife.  This is because, career woman will have to pay more attention to her job and her time for family is very limited.  Career woman is always busy with her schedules and sometimes she gives all the responsibility to her maid to handle their family.  This is how sometimes in some case, children are more get close with their maid rather than their own mother.  This trend should not be exists in our community because family is more important than the other things.  Different with housewife, the centre in her life is the family and her life revolves around her family.

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Raya? This is how my raya.

Hello my gorgeous/awesome friend and my Teech!

   Are you satisfied celebrates Hari Raya? Well, as you know, UiTM Perak only gave 11 days for us to celebrate it. What a life?! I really don’t satisfy with that and I need more time so that I can enjoy Hari Raya with my family. When we talk about Hari Raya, automatically we think about ‘lemang’, new clothes, ‘duit raya’ and whatever that related to Hari Raya. Everybody happy celebrate Hari Raya but at the same time we have to be sad because Ramadhan had left usL. Oh yaaa! This year my family and I celebrate Hari Raya at my mother’s side at Bagan Serai, Perak. Yeayyyyy! Clapped, clapped, and clapped!

    During malam raya, my twins and I so busy setting curtains from 8 p.m-12 a.m. Yaaa I know it took a long hours. What so funny?! It is because my twins and I was chatting, watching television while setting it. Hahaha! ‘Rendang’, and ‘ketupat’ already prepared in the evening before malam raya. At night, we (except my twins and I) had a rest after tired doing preparation for Hari Raya. Our colour theme for this Raya is colourful because we don’t set any color and it’s up to ourselves.

   My grandfather is Imam at I don’t know what is mosque name. hehehe! So, it is obligate to my family go to Hari Raya’s pray. After that, we are sitting together to grate each other. Actually, Hari raya day is day that giving opportunity to us to apologize each other with family, relatives, and friends. On 3rd day of Raya, at my grandfather’s house, we did thanksgiving feast for my 2nd brother and his wife for their wedding. Fortunately, we don’t need prepared anything because we use catering service to provide food. Thanks GodJ. I think that’s all for my story about Hari Raya and I hope uolls like itJ. Eh! I think it’s not too late to wish SELAMAT HARI RAYA MAAF ZAHIR DAN BATIN. Bye! 


Selamat Hari Raya (:

Assalamualaikum everyone!

How are you guys doing? I hope you all have a splendid hari raya even though we can only celebrate it for a few days.  My hari raya went very well since there is a lot of food to eat.  My mum's best hari raya dishes would be ayam masak merah and laksa.  Both of the dishes are my favorite and so does everyone else who came to our open house last Saturday. Although I have two tests coming soon on this Saturday and Sunday, but still it didn't come between hari raya and me.  I still celebrate hari raya happily with my beloved family and relatives.  All I did during hari raya was eating and watching tv because there was a lot of interesting things to watch.  I also went out to watch The Conjuring with my friend and it was awesome!  The movie was great and of course, scary (: All I can say about my hari raya for this year is that it is great, wonderful, lovely and memorable (:

sakinah nasir (:

1st day of syawal


Every year, after one month of fasting, Muslims celebrate Hari Raya Puasa which falls in the month of Syawal. All Muslims celebrate the day with great joy. In the morning, they go to the mosque to pray. Then, on returning home, they receive guests and relatives who come to pay them a call.
Days before, the womenfolk make many varieties of cakes, cookies and sweetmeats. They also cook 'rendang' curries and prepare 'satay' to go with the 'ketupat'. Homes are decorated with many coloured lights all over the garden. Small lamps are lit and placed along the driveway.
On Hari Raya Day, many Malaysians visit their Muslim friends to share their joy. They receive warm hospitality and are entertained to a feast of specially prepared food. Boys and girls wear new clothes and shoes. Girls wear jewellery and boys new 'songkoks'.
The town is usually crowded with Muslims dressed gaily and going about. They visit their friends and relatives while some go to the cinemas or to the Lake Gardens. Many, however, go back to their 'kampungs' to celebrate the festival with their parents. It is also a time for family reunions. Everyone rejoices during this festive season.

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Saturday, August 3, 2013

Sexy Body Paragraph 1, Edit 02


Submitted to : Mr. Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, tutor
Submitted by : Liyana & Hazirah
Submitted on : August 1st, 2013

The Most Expensive Food in the World

There are various types of caviar thatcome from several places in the world. One of the most popular is Beluga caviar. Beluga caviar comes from the Beluga sturgeon fish which is the largest of the sturgeon breeds. Most of them can be found in the Caspian Sea.Tom (2008) says that the older the fish, the more elegant and exquisite the flavour.Another type of caviar is Sterlet caviar. Sterlat caviar gets its name from the Sterlet sturgeon. Most of the Sterlet sturgeon fish exists in the Black Sea near Russia. Olcott (2011) says that “Sterlet caviar has smaller eggs than Beluga caviar, and is typically served on top of toast” (online). This is shown in Figure 1.

Figure 1: Caviar is usually served on top of toast

Osserta caviar is also categorized as one of the popular caviar. It is well-known to be the most flavorful from the popular types of caviar. This type of caviar is harvested from Osserta sturgeon fish which is mainly inhabit in the Black Sea. All the caviar should be served with a non-metallic spoon because the metallic spoon will reduce the nutrition of the caviar.

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Introduction Edit 04


Submitted to : MR. Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, tutor 
Submitted by : Liyana & Hazirah
Submitted on : July 30th, 2013

The Most Expensive Food in the World

Do you know what caviar is? Caviar is the eggs of a large fish; sturgeon that we eat and it is usually very expensive (New Oxford Dictionary, 2003). Caviar is the food chosen among higher ranking people. For them, the more expensive the food, the higher the ranking of their position. This kind of food has its own benefits and rich in vitamins. Our body needs to stay healthy to grow properly, so, we need food that is full of nutrition.Olcott (2011) says that “caviar is a delicacy consisting of salted, non-fertilized fish eggs and the best types vary in size, color, and texture” (online). When talking about caviar, some of us maybe do not know caviar’s existence. Below, we will figure out about types of caviar, the advantages and disadvantages of it and the opinions of people who have taste it.

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Sexy Body Paragraph 1, Edit 02 (:

Assalamualaikum and hello everyone!

Submitted to : Mr. Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, tutor
Submitted by : Sakinah & Ba
Submitted on : August 1st, 2013

Three Themes for a Perfect Wedding : our choice

The first theme for a perfect wedding is a classical wedding.  There are several styles that can be created from the classical wedding concept, such as traditional style and retro vintage style that might fulfill the couple's satisfaction of wanting to look classic.  Usually, "Traditional weddings appeal to most brides and their conservative grandmothers" (Obenschain, n.d., online).  The couple can choose their own methods and decorations for their wedding day based on their culture. For instance, for a Chinese wedding ceremony, " The bride and groom wear traditional Chinese wedding costumes during their wedding ceremony" (Ng, 2013, p. 5).  In Chinese traditional wedding, bride will wear a red veil over her head until the groom removes it during their wedding ceremony as shown in Figure 1.

Figure 1

Besides traditional wedding style, retro vintage style also brings the mood of classical wedding concept.  As Matthews et al. (2005) writes, beautiful articles with age-old refinements make terrific gifts.  Nowadays, the demand for the retro style wedding gowns, wedding bands and jewelry is gradually increasing.  The retro vintage style wedding that gives a romantic kind of feeling to the couple become quite popular and will be a memorable moment to the couple.

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Introduction Edit 04 (:

Assalamualaikum and hi!

Submitted to : Mr. Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, tutor
Submitted by : Sakinah & Ba
Submitted on : July 30th, 2013

Three Themes for a Perfect Wedding : our choice 

Marriage should be special and sacred in one's life as two souls unite together and become one. For those couples who are lucky to find their soul mates, they might wish to have an unforgettable and memorable wedding reception that can only happen once in a lifetime.  Therefore, to have an ideal wedding, a couple should plan their Big Day thoroughly so that it will be meaningful to both couple and their families.  Furthermore, "Brides are expected to be in calm control of their wedding, making decisions for the Big Day in a business-like, rational manner" (Boden, 2001, online).  In order to have a perfect wedding, choosing the right theme that suits their personalities and lifestyles can offer a great satisfaction and enjoyment to the couple as well as their guests (Howes, 2013).  Classical, wonderland and outdoor will be the best and the most extraordinary themes that the couple will ever imagine having for their Big Day.

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Friday, August 2, 2013

Body Paragraph 1, Edit 02


Submitted to : Mr. Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, Tutor
Submitted by : Hanani & Nabilah
Submitted on : Aug, 1st 2013


     One of the fashion designers who grew up in Malaysia is Datuk Rizalman Ibrahim. He was born in Georgetown, Penang. During his was childhood, he said “I loved to draw using pencils and watercolours, I thought about graphics but at that time it seemed many people going into it so I jumped into fashion (Bullis, 2000, p. 92). He is interested in handling fabrics and from there he won a competition for the first time. Rizalman has been involved in fashion for 20 years and he has achieved many awards. For instance, Stylo Star of The Year Award 2008, Best Young Designer for Anugerah Pesona Tenun Berita Harian 2011, Piala Seri Endon. Although, he is a star in fashion industry, Rizalman has not forgotten his heritage in his design. He always concentrates on Malay traditional and contemporary style as Figure 1 shows. Furthermore, he has established his own boutique, Rizalman Haute Couture on 2009 when his brand becomes popular. In 2012, he has collaboration with hypermarket chain. He see this collaboration as a bonus as Tesco wishes to work with designers for believe in doing what they want. 

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Introduction, Edit 04

Submitted to : Mr. Airil Haimi Mohd Adnan, tutor
Submitted by : Hanani & Nabilah
Submitted on : July, 30th 2013


It is not easy to design clothes, Bullis (2000) writes that, “fashion is to shape or make something using your hands or only a few tools” (p. 4). Usually, to create garments, fashion designers must form ideas and then convey it through drawing by using marker. Lately, we could see that many Malaysian designers use their skills to generate and develop ideas of fashion garments. This indicates that sooner or later, fashion will become more popular at a particular time and we need the designers’ services to make people look in different from one individual to others. Furthermore, as fashion designers, they should think creatively and “will use their sense of style and flair for the original to design clothes and accessories for production and sale” (Gallanis, 2010, p. 17). Even they are in the same career as fashion designers but they have their own story. There are three well-known names of fashion designers in Malaysia; they are Datuk Rizalman Ibrahim, Amir Luqman, and AzuraAzwa.
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