are we prisoners???

Assalamualaikum..grammar time!!it was a hard day!!we were sent to grammar jail because there are many grammatical errors and not relevant contents..at that time we must corrected our conclusion and find another ideas to make our essay interesting..thankfully, after two time we were sent to jail, Teech accept our conclusion at the end of class..seriously, i feel so happy and free for grammar and redo the essay..during jail time,some of us feel sad,stress and enjoy with this punishment..hihihi..maybe we can asked someone's ideas and help each others to correct the mistakes..finally,we can combine our introduction,body 1,2,3 and conclusion..thanks to all my friends and especially Teech!!! :)

-yana akhir-