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Submitted to : Mr Airil Haimi B. Mohd Adnan
Submitted by : Akid & Anis
Submitted on : August 1st 2013

Career women and housewives might be difference in term of personality and identity.  This is the most specialty that make them difference.  “A housewife might be very meek, gentle and mild while a career woman has a stronger personality” (Cissysong, 2010, online).  Housewife is a mother and wife at home that taking care of her husband and children all the time and will give full attention to her family.  Despite housewife, career woman only gives half of her attention rather than housewife.  This is because, career woman will have to pay more attention to her job and her time for family is very limited.  Career woman is always busy with her schedules and sometimes she gives all the responsibility to her maid to handle their family.  This is how sometimes in some case, children are more get close with their maid rather than their own mother.  This trend should not be exists in our community because family is more important than the other things.  Different with housewife, the centre in her life is the family and her life revolves around her family.

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